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Daniel Meyer
10-18-2004, 08:40 AM
Kind of mood piece...not sure if I got it or not.

Feedback?

(snip)
It is the silence that I miss...and the stars...
(endsnip)

City of Mist (http://lifeisaroad.com/cityofmist.htm)

http://lifeisaroad.com/images/journey.JPG

R J
10-18-2004, 11:18 AM
Good writin by hand dare buddy...........

BG
10-18-2004, 03:59 PM
great little story Daniel.
You can feel the emotion at any level of the story whether it's the gentle caress of the wife, the 100MPH banked turn or the water droplets on the arm.

Daniel Meyer
10-19-2004, 07:07 AM
Thanks guys...haven't posted many new ones lately...I'm pretty busy at work...and I'm working on the Alaska book for next spring.

Never enough time....